Blood Red Lipstick by Kelly Bender
Page 1 (4 Panels)
Panel 1 (largest panel)
We are in Paris France and we are at an intersection, we can
see the Eifel tower to the far right down the street. kiddy corner (right across
from where we are standing ) is a quaint sidewalk cafe, we can see 4-8 tables
on the corner. The front table has a
gorgeous Asian lady wearing a red dress with a red purse by her feet. She is using her compact mirror to apply red
lipstick to her lips. She is sitting on the left side of the table facing
towards the Eifel tower. There is an
older Caucasian gentleman waiter (40’s) bald wearing glasses and a nice white shirt
with a black bowtie and a black vest carrying a tray of glasses filled with red
wine and bread to a table 2 away to the
left from the lady (her back is to them).
The table has 3 people they are an African Dictator and his 2 African Military
Generals. (45-60 year old respectively)
People are walking tourists are taking photos of the Eifel
tower we can see in the distance.
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Panel 2
Closer zoom of the Asian lady sitting at the table all by
herself she is attractive, she has jet black hair which is parted in the middle
and is shoulder length hair, she has red lipstick (if it’s in color) she is
wearing a red skin tight dress which is very revealing. There has a wine glass
half filled with red wine, we can see a candle and part of a bowl on a small
plate.
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Panel 2
The waiter is handing her a menu which is in a typical brown
leather case (which most menus come in)
LADY:
Merci
Panel 3
We are showing the ladies gorgeous legs, her legs are
crossed but the slit in the dress shows all her legs.
From this view we can see the waiter walks away to another
table, we can also just barely see the the top part of her red purse.
(expensive handbag) “Coach”
NO DIALOGUE
Blood Red Lipstick by Kelly Bender
Page 2 (6 Panels)
Panel 1
We are looking over
the ladies shoulder (practically down her top) as we can see the lady opening
the menu and inside is a folded note.
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Panel 2
She opens the note and reads it. (we can’t see what she is
reading)
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Panel 3
She then folds the note really small.
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Panel 4
She then burns the note using the candle.
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Panel 5
She then places the burning note on the plate
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Panel 6
She covers it with a bowl which is on her table
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Blood Red Lipstick by Kelly Bender
Page 3 (5 Panels)
Panel 1
The lady reaches into her cleavage
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Panel 2
We can see money in her hand (which was in her cleavage) and
puts it under the plate she just burned with the bowl.
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Panel 3 (largest panel)
She is walking away in the direction of the AFRICAN dictator
and his 2 military men.
AFRICAN DICTATOR:
Hey gorgeous, want to party with a leader of men?
AFRICAN GENERAL 1:
Don’t do it man, those French call girls will be the death
of you.
AFRICAN GENERAL 2:
Haha but what a way to go!
Panel 4
We can see the same waiter cleaning up the table.
NO DIALOGUE
Panel 5
We have scanned down from the waiter and we can see the
chair and beneath the chair we can see the top of the ladies red purse.
Blood Red Lipstick by Kelly Bender
Page 04 (2 Panels)
Panel 1
Close up of the purse
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Panel 2 (massive panel)
Large explosion!! Chairs, broken glass, rubble, body parts,
everything flying everywhere.
SFX:
BOOM!!!!
Blood Red Lipstick by Kelly Bender
Page 05 (4 Panels)
Panel 1
We can see an elderly British man (60’s) wearing a light brown colored suit and sitting
at a large oak desk and he is smiling
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Panel 2
The door opens and we can see another British man (40’s) wearing a dark blue suit.
MAN AT DOOR:
It’s done.
Panel 3
We are back to the man who is sitting at the desk
MAN SITTING AT THE DESK:
I knew it was done when
I sent her.
Bring her home.
Panel 4
We are looking at both of the men.
MAN AT THE DOOR:
She’s on her way as we speak.
THE END
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